Great... but not Hank-em-up great...
It has more darkness than an elm street, compton alley; but it just doesn't win me over. When I imagine maddness i invision more unexpected turns. The slicing for the amen was unusual to say the least. Could have used more variation.
Its catchy as hell. catchy enough to be jammed to in my car thru town :D
8/10. If this were 'MAC8 - Lullaby Gone Awry' you would win fo' sho'
/review
Lol. I shall change the name then! Thanks for the suggestion :P
Hmmm....
Where to start... For starters... its not fast enough to be technicall madness however the high distortions and unknowing twists and turns kept me going. I loved the 303-esque thing... however the lead there was horrible... and DUDE.
I DO FUCKING BREAKCORE.
I didnt like the fusion of techno and metal, even though i liked both parts. Fusion should be left to radio-whores lol
the part at about 2:09 saved your song for me man. Im not sure how long that took you... but it had to be rediculous. :D
ehh im giving you a 7/10. coulda been better but I just didnt care for the fusions. :C
lol, thanks for the review.... its was very up and down reading it. One minute there is a compliment, the next is criticism...I was like... awesome thanks, ouch... really, ok, good point.... ooo thanks..... ouch, ah.... hmmm. Sweet... etc. lol.
Anyways. 2:09 took a while- there was a lot of inputting in the piano roll... then I did a whole bunch of copy pasting and then the automation clips... then i did some after work in audacity.... my personal favorite part of the song is the static white noise effect i had in there.
Um, i have no idea what fusion breakcore is... even though i've been submitting for a year in the electronic genre, i haven't really spent time trying to learn what is what and how to do anything... so my music hasn't really improved much over a year. But recently i've been trying to change everything. I'm not a personal fan of this song as a listener... in fact, most of my work doesn't end up how i want it to sound when first starting off. However just like every artist get attached to certain cool things i learnt during a song... or a beat, or rhythm, or sweet synth or something. Dam i'm rambling about nothing.....
so in conclusion i'm a radio-whore.
Thanks for the review spik.
I make an oath never to try fusion ever again, what ever it is.
Later.
A fucking classic!
This is by far the most moving track ive heard on NG; infact anywhere (besides 'no surprises' by radiohead). It, in ways, describes my life. Its shameful this was overlooked by newgrounds members, its literally a part of history for this site. Right up there with any paragonx9 song and the endless handbag.
ive been brought to tears... its beautiful. so... beautiful...
Thanks for the review:)
What I need is someone else to make an animation/music vid for me, then I can egt some more reviews for my tracks:)
Appreciate the review.
Dark yet generic.
Cheshyre would be proud :)
This is like the perfect song for a madness film! the whirring bass-synth, the generic break (an ode to the original music, perhaps?) and the siren thing :P.
in my opinion, the guitar wasnt the best addition to this...
Good luck man! I bet you're getting top 5 at least! :D
Wow thanks man, yeah maybe i can place somewhere up there in the top 5 =D
Thanks for the review!
my only competition!
This song has got a run for its money. the many effects and transitions surpass any of the current submissions. I wish the best of luck.... even though you won't need it with this gem! :D
Oh really? I thought my transitions were pretty bad. But I guess ones opinions differ.
Good luck in the competition.
LOVE.
I remember when you showed this to me and i helped you with some things on MSN. wow it turned out great! Still dont like the DnB drums you selected, but itll grow on me.
Thanks for the kind words man!
haha thats becus its breakbeats really ;) it just issnt a category on ng X( also, i diddnt select any break man :P i made it myself as usual. so dnb is the closest i can get without throwing it in the pool of techno.
sadly, as you can hear i diched the help you contributed with. but im using the siren in another musical experiment ;D so its not wasted. i also found the exact same sound on my pc later o.O turns out i used it in a failed song way back wich sucked balls. anyways, glad you liked it! peace n all that jazz
lolol
diz iz g00d n stuf lol bt i lke paragon mre. mybe u shld be mre liek him lol
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Well where do i start...
The melody was painful to listen to for long periods of time. The drums are generic and monotonous. try more variation to get a better percussion. the tones at times although were pretty good. nice and dark so the name fits at least.
Look into downloading more samples and using the fruity slicer in accordance to the drum loops packed with the program. visit www.phatdrumloops.com for some drum loops. To save them right click>>save target as...
5/10... may seem rough, but outta it you're gonna get somwe wicked loops man!
hey man, no worries on a bad score, at least its criticism, and thanks for the loops. Unfortunately i only have the demo version, but im pretty sure i can still make better stuff.
Keepin it Grounds,
-The Dead Man
the synths are orgasmic!
this is a better trance song on here. needs a better drum mixture tho, and the noise effect on poizone is a pester. fillter it and it'll be fixed. the intro made me laugh out loud, literally. use a snare instead of a clap in your next song, try new stuff, it'll help ya.
thanks
monotonous. lacking. out of tune. needs work.
well, it's not the best, but it most decfenitely is'nt the worst. the bass key is really annoying, it just ruins the song. although... it does sound like it can be used for puzzles or frustrating situations in games or movies. if you adjust it, it can sound awesome.
Completely true. I know, it sounds annoying, but the loop WAS for puzzles that are annoying... or frustrating situations. They would go well with this song. And I changed the bass to a different piano key, and I might work on it more. But I am not too sure how people would react to different versions of the same song. Oh well, if people hate it, I will be sure to remove it.
Thanks for the review!
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