Oh lord.
This is awful. I won't even sugar-coat it.
The kick/snare combo is overused, now. Plus, with a song like this, a dark sound and such, the drums should be a little less varied. The drop is way too powerful and on top. And the actual bassline... my god... if I hear another wobble, i'm gonna lose it.
Now, I'm sure you're just starting off on this whole thing(music), so it's almost OK to take a cookie-cutter mould; but you gotta try and find your unique sound through it all.